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Critque me please!by *RenaKit

Digital Art / Other / Other

RRAAHH 3 FACKING HOURS! Anyways yuh. If you can please PLEASE Critque this. And please don't say "OMG ITS PERFECT." lol

I want you guys to bash me. I need to get better. Soooo Smash me with critques. xD Thanks guys.

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Critique by ~GoldenPurr 6 days, 13 hours ago

Alright let's start of with the cat,
first of all maybe the back leg on the right is too straight, and it has no curve at the top so it look's a bit stiff, and the tail is a bit too straight too.
the neck is nicely curved and the ears and head is alll well done. Another thing I noticed is alll the paws are in different directions try to keep them pointing the same way for a good pose. And I think maybe try lowering the tail being connected to it's bum, because it sort of looks like it's coming out of it's back.

The Lighting is very nice and detailed I don't think you need to improve on that but since it is sunny in this image make sure the cat has a shadow otherwise she looks soulless the background is lovely but one of the bushes has a big orange line ? I'm not too sure what that is.

Other than that this is a really good drawing ! ^^

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Critique by =screechtones Mar 3, 2013, 3:16:02 PM

alright, i'm first gonna start with the grass. it doesn't have any depth to it, and seems to be a low cut, felt-like surface.
the background is somewhat bleak, i wouldn't use the blur/smudge tool that much.
now, the cat. i'm gonna start from the bottom up.
it's legs seem to straight and stiff. remember, the leg on almost any animal bends at where the paw meets the arm, about the middle of the arm itself, and pivots at the joint where it meets the body.
the tail it the right length in proportion to the rest of the body, but is encountering the same stiffness problem as the legs are. remember, the tail on a cat is like the spine, its very flexible.
the last thing i have to comment on is the nose, which should be positioned a little higher.
other than that, the rest is great, ans i'd love to see more from you! c:

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~ChrissietheArchen Feb 2, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

1. the anatomy, :3 i'll give it a slid cause it looks pretty. But the front doesn't actually have a tuft of fur there. The arms actually are pretty close and strong. And the tail is a little clunky i recommend drawing the spine and the tail in one line. It makes it seem more naturally fluid. Also the back legs... i sound like a hypocrite saying this but skeletons are your friends. but besides from that pretty good.
2. Lighting. The actually rays really do look 'oh mi god amazing' but how it hits the character is unlike the places. It should be very light on the edge then less so onwards. Making the cat with more shape and structure. You can do it by lowering the opacity on the lighting and do the simple shading (however you like) blocking in the dark and light. Leaving light in the dark. Then adding a white line along the edge.
3. Background. Unlike my background were you have little to no idea to what's going on, i know with yours. All it's missing is the detail. I recommend if your using layers, make the character out of sight then go full out with the background. The flower is out of nowhere but looks lovely.
4. Color. All i have to say is that, the sky isn't always blue and grass isn't always green. Brown cat's aren't always a consistent brown and green eyes aren't always green. Sorry, PK's color tut.

~catcarisssa123 Nov 2, 2012

This is great, I like how the eyes aren't just one shade of green.
These are some flaws I saw;
-the tail is to strait and to high up on the backbone
-the flower doesn't look like a flower when outlined in green
-what is that orange streak in the bushes
Other than those I think its great.

~Rainbow-Productions Jul 14, 2012 Professional Writer

I like everything but the tail, which seems placed kind of high-up on the cat's back. It's a very warm, cute picture, and I really like what you did with the legs. (You got them in proportion very well.

*RenaKit Jul 14, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Thank you. (:

~marshcaramellow Mar 3, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Here I go!

The nose seems too .. button - y. It sticks out, while a normal cat's wouldn't. It also is MUCH too small. The curve of the muzzle is too sharp as well; A real cat's would be much more angled. I'd curve the forward - facing part of the cat's eye more outward as well. The mouth is too much like a human's, and I see you've reverted to a more human style. Fully connect the mouth to the front of the muzzle. The chin is too pronounced as well.
Your cat has a chest, which real cats don't; cats have no collarbones and so it appears as if their forelimbs connect to their neck. Your cat's legs are really straight; they wouldn't be able to walk like that! Thepaws look a bit strange; they have only three toes (not counting the thumb - toe - things (for lack of a better word xD) The thumb - toe position is wrong on the right forelimb; it should be slightly more hidden.
On to the back legs/hindqurters!
The first problem I notice is that again, they're too straight. [link]
This is the most accurate source I could find; it has many other helpful references as well!
There should be three joints there - not counting the 'wrist' joint - yet I see none.
The right hind leg is very off; it's much too close to the cat's other leg. I'd recommend moving it slightly to the left. The fluffy, upper part of the cat's left hind leg is too angled; round it out a bit.
The tail is rather detached. It is too far left and I see no indication whatsoever that the tail is slightly behind the hindquarters. In effect, it looks like a slightly curved, furry pole extending from the top of the cat's butt.
I'm assuming this is a kitten, based on its proportions.

Those are the only problems I see; I really like the lighting and such.

*RenaKit Mar 4, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Thanks. :3 I'll work on those things.

*MagaSushi Mar 3, 2012 Student General Artist

I love love love the lighting! I might red-line it, if you want.

*RenaKit Mar 4, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

That would be so helpful. ;w;

*Freeze-pop88 Feb 18, 2012 Professional General Artist

well... The back legs would be bent at a certain point, close to the body. Its front legs could be a little bent also, with an elbow. Its tail should be more connected to its back, as if it were kinda connected to the spine, its nose looks like it is falling off, and the back leg tward the left is a little weird looking, as if it weren't part of the body anymore...

Sorry if i sound harsh, I'm just trying to help

~firestarlver Feb 11, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

its tail could be a little bit farther to the right

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